Narrative writing.

The town was called “Roseville” it was a kind, amazing, friendly and caring town. But that all changed when there was a murder, a 17-year-old QB(Quater back) with good grades had been murdered. Everyone in the town had known him, he was a kind-hearted young teenager, but he came from a dark-hearted family that didn’t get in the way of how he felt and acted. When everyone found out about the news the town changed and went from happy and cheerful to quiet and sad.

There were four main friends that were in love and had been going to the same school for years and all four of them are still in the same class and school. Their names were Devon and Tyler were in love and Trevor and Lavinia were in love they were all close friends with Ricky(The one who got murdered).

The four friends had been trying to figure out who killed their classmate Ricky for a very long period of time. They followed all of his steps and tried to find any sort of clues to find out who it was, but one day the four friends found Ricky’s football jacket in an abandoned car that they found in the Sweetwater river forest. They took the jumper and checked all the pockets and they found a USB drive, they plugged it into the laptop and watched the terrifying video they burst into tears.

All of a sudden “BANG!” a man had bursted and hit the door down commanding the friends to hand the video over the girls took the USB drive and almost handed the drive over, but “NO”  said the boys with a lot of courage they said no and moved the girls behind them the boys said “I love you” to their girlfriends the man almost hit them with his hand raised, but a lady named Feresa was the hero of the town and she swept in and grabbed his arm and took him to the ground putting his hands behind his back the boys hugged the girls full of relief.

The cops came and took the man to prison the man has revealed who the murderer was and everyone was shocked the murderer was Ricky’s father. Everyone was shocked the cops were going to collect the father from his house, the daughter said “He’s in the barn the cops went and opened the doors and saw him hung up in the air and realized he attempted suicide by the time the cops got there the father was already dead and after that day the town was left peacefully.

1 Comment on Narrative writing.

  1. Matua Dudley Adams
    April 2, 2019 at 7:48 pm (5 years ago)

    Kia Ora Laani

    What a sad way to die, at the hands of your own father. The friends must of had a lot of time for Ricky to be so determined to find who the killer was.

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