Shrunk Writing

On one weird Friday, Tino and Sisilina walked into the classroom and we saw one of our friends Roscoe.As he was talking the teacher came up to him and said get out right now that when Roscoe started to smell.

“Ghee” look everything all of a sudden was big as we were shrunken.Hey Roscoe and Tino we will never get big “EVER AGAIN”.Hey guys where did those kids go ohhh wait never mind.You know what guys let’s go home and go to sleep.

Minutes go by then hours went by and still nothing changes.While Sisilina and Tino are resting all we hear is Roscoe having fun and making loads of noises. Tino shouted Roscoe didn’t reply Roscoe 5 years later didn’t reply Roscoe finally answered.What do you want Tino said be quiet i’m trying to get some rest.Roscoe shouted HAHAHAHAHA shut up!

While being small for our whole life it was boring because we hardly cant do anything because we were small and every object was to big for us to reach and crazy.For the three of us was really hard because we were shrunken for years and grew back.

As we were going to fall a sleep Roscoe could hear people,”Oii get up can you hear that oi” we went for a look and out of the blue something big something horrific.

A fly done done done. We looked at the fly for a long time,then….. Jump on it let’s go now.”Ummmmm sure lets go” so off we go and not long we finally landed somewhere in the land of the bottom of the couch. 

We looked up and oh my god how will we get up there.Look at who comes and saves the day Roscoe oh yeah Roscoe.”So guys i’m going to lay down and use sit on my bum.One goes then the next person then the next one but we are missing someone Roscoe.

Finally Roscoe makes it up, then the fly come.”Hey guys let’s jump off. Oh hell nah.Come on 3…2…1 go so off we go.Why is it hard as they didn’t know they jumped into a big pile of white rusty old paper which made us stink.

They finally could hear people all the way down down under the paper.Hands come up and then heads.”Hey look it is Meletonga,Puke,Justice and Taati” the three kids  went missing for many many years.

1 Comment on Shrunk Writing

  1. naesha
    November 25, 2019 at 9:48 am (4 years ago)

    Good job Sisilina and Tino. The thing I liked about your work was your story and the thing you need to work on is rereading your work and make sure it makes sense. But other ten that good story!

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