Shrunken Writing

Friday afternoon Me Justice and Roscoe went to go check on our science experiment. Roscoe accidentally tipped over our project and it went all on us three. We all started getting this weird feeling. Roscoe and Justice looked normal to me but everything around us looked humongous. “ We Shrunk “ Yelled Roscoe “ Nooooooo” I replied. My arm started getting itchy and I had a look and I saw three hearts. I checked Roscoe and Justice arm and they had the same thing. We had three lives.

All these bug come storming towards us. They instantly stopped in a matter of seconds. They started talking this kooky language that we could understand. They looked awful but they wanted to help so we took the offer. We jumped on them and off we went, flying high in the class.

We landed by this big building AKA Computer hard drive. We didn’t know where we landed but at least we were safe. We could hear people so we went to go check it out. The building opened and people the same size came staunching out. They were the kids that went missing 60 years ago.

We couldn’t believe they were still alive. They told us how much times they tried to go back to normal and how much lives they sacrificed. They all were on 1 life left. The same thing happened to them. They built the building and survived there. They had a list of things they could use to make a potion to go back to normal.

We got equipped for the adventure that was gonna come our way. We traveled around the class but we traveled very slowly despite our size. The first thing on the list was to get a toenail. We spent a lot of time searching but then i remembered Roscoe had stinky feet. So we used his Toenail instead. 

Next we had to get crumbs so we started searching for ages but then we found a crumb. But then Justice started war with the Ants. We entered the wrong turf. They launched at us and ate us to death. That was one life down. Only 2 more left. We had no crumb so we went back to the turf and took the crumb and ran for our lives. One of the ants saw Justice and knocked him. I picked him up and carried him away and revived him.

I whistled out to the bugs and they flew us back to the base. Mele put everything together and I was the first to try it. Eliminated Taati Wepiha-Reo. Something was missing so I gave my saliva then…..

I went back to normal then Justice then Mele then Roscoe. We did it.I  It took 2 months but it didn’t feel like it. We were back and safe at home.

2 Comments on Shrunken Writing

  1. anitacps18
    November 22, 2019 at 9:54 am (4 years ago)

    great work justice and Taati the thing I like about your work is how you explained how it was done and the thing you need to work on is to do that 3 thing when you add yourself into your writing to

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  2. Nane
    November 22, 2019 at 10:25 am (4 years ago)

    your story was great

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